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Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Paraphrasing ( Science)
The digital assesment measured a students ability to find informations by computers.
Skills post 2 (Summarzing) Book called "Science" page 140
They did some kind of digital competitions. And South Korean students beat out their peers from 18 other countries. In the first assesment of digital literacy. But the girls pot higher score than the boys form average 24 points. The digital assesment measured a students ability to follow hyperlinks to obtain information on.
Skills post 2 (paraphrasing) Bear attacks
Paraphrasing 4th paragraph.
It shows that getting attacked by bear is more less than drowning. More than 101 people drowned and 5 people got attacked by bear.
It shows that getting attacked by bear is more less than drowning. More than 101 people drowned and 5 people got attacked by bear.
Skills post1 (edit) Compare and contrast
Camp big Apple, Ranch West camp, and Head Start splash. With these 3 camps there are
many things to compare and contrast. For my opinion, I think Camp Big Apple is the best.
To do compare and contrast, I have to know about good things and bad things about these camps.
Camp Big Apple: -Teachers are at least master degree so you can trust them.
-It's too noisy because it's held in NewYork.
-Can prepare for important tests.
-It's only 3 weeks that you don't have much time to learn.
Ranch West Camp: -You can choose subject so you will be more participate at studying. Because that's what you like!
-It's far from the city, so it's not a good place to study.
-It's 4 weeks and it's long enough for learning English.
-You can only learn 1 subject.
Head Start Splash: -You can experience nature and get used to it.
-Beach is too close so it will make you want to go to the beach.
-You can be with your family.
-It's too long.
All of camps have goods and bads. But still I think that Camp Big Apple is the best.
Now, to compare and contrast 3 camps it will be more easier because wrote about goods and bads.
I will compare before doing contrast. To compare these camps, there isn't a lot of things.
But I will start with the first one. The thing that is same is that we use English in all of the camps. Also, it's
international camp, so many people arev coming form different countries. So to communicate with them, they
have to use English, and that will make your English skill better. Second the purpose of going to those camps
are same. The reason why yhey are going to those camps are to learn English skills and Higher your math
scores and some other tests. I think these are all for the comparing. So I will move on to contrasting. The
thing is that is different is that they learn things like English like the same. But for their hobby, or their favorite
subject, it's all different. We can learn different things. Also, the different thing is the place where it's held is
different, one is held in USA, one is held in Canada. and the other is held in Philippines.
By doing compare and contrast, I could know lot's of same things and different things. I think
this will make me more easy to understand and write comparing and contrasting homework. And still, i think
camp Big Apple is the best!!
many things to compare and contrast. For my opinion, I think Camp Big Apple is the best.
To do compare and contrast, I have to know about good things and bad things about these camps.
Camp Big Apple: -Teachers are at least master degree so you can trust them.
-It's too noisy because it's held in NewYork.
-Can prepare for important tests.
-It's only 3 weeks that you don't have much time to learn.
Ranch West Camp: -You can choose subject so you will be more participate at studying. Because that's what you like!
-It's far from the city, so it's not a good place to study.
-It's 4 weeks and it's long enough for learning English.
-You can only learn 1 subject.
Head Start Splash: -You can experience nature and get used to it.
-Beach is too close so it will make you want to go to the beach.
-You can be with your family.
-It's too long.
All of camps have goods and bads. But still I think that Camp Big Apple is the best.
Now, to compare and contrast 3 camps it will be more easier because wrote about goods and bads.
I will compare before doing contrast. To compare these camps, there isn't a lot of things.
But I will start with the first one. The thing that is same is that we use English in all of the camps. Also, it's
international camp, so many people arev coming form different countries. So to communicate with them, they
have to use English, and that will make your English skill better. Second the purpose of going to those camps
are same. The reason why yhey are going to those camps are to learn English skills and Higher your math
scores and some other tests. I think these are all for the comparing. So I will move on to contrasting. The
thing is that is different is that they learn things like English like the same. But for their hobby, or their favorite
subject, it's all different. We can learn different things. Also, the different thing is the place where it's held is
different, one is held in USA, one is held in Canada. and the other is held in Philippines.
By doing compare and contrast, I could know lot's of same things and different things. I think
this will make me more easy to understand and write comparing and contrasting homework. And still, i think
camp Big Apple is the best!!
Thursday, August 11, 2011
Skill post 2
Summarizing
Shark Attacks
This article is mainly about shark attacks. Lot's of people think that they will attack them, but actually they don't. Like, there are more accidents about struck by lightning than getting attacked by shark. For real, in the coastal states of the U.S, about 180 people got struck by lightning, but only 11 people got attacked by sharks. Also, there are several ways to reduce the chances of being attacked by a shark. It's that to travel in groups. Sharks are more likely to attack a solitary. And, stay out of water if you got hurt or have a cut, because sharks have a good sense of smell.
Shark Attacks
This article is mainly about shark attacks. Lot's of people think that they will attack them, but actually they don't. Like, there are more accidents about struck by lightning than getting attacked by shark. For real, in the coastal states of the U.S, about 180 people got struck by lightning, but only 11 people got attacked by sharks. Also, there are several ways to reduce the chances of being attacked by a shark. It's that to travel in groups. Sharks are more likely to attack a solitary. And, stay out of water if you got hurt or have a cut, because sharks have a good sense of smell.
Sunday, August 7, 2011
Funny Video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aemXgP-2xyg&feature=player_detailpage
This is funny video I chosed this topic because laughing is really good for your health. And it cause good things in your life. Some of scientist says that if you laugh really hard one time it will make you to live 3hours more. But when you get mad or angry as the opposite, your life will get 3hours more shorter. Just by laughing and getting mad can make your life more longer and more shorter. If you can't laugh a lot because of your hard life, you can see funny things as the video on the top. And that will make you feel more better and it will also make your life more longer. So I hope lot's of poeple sees these kinds of videos and have a fun and more longer life. Also I hope you laughed by watching this video!!!
This is funny video I chosed this topic because laughing is really good for your health. And it cause good things in your life. Some of scientist says that if you laugh really hard one time it will make you to live 3hours more. But when you get mad or angry as the opposite, your life will get 3hours more shorter. Just by laughing and getting mad can make your life more longer and more shorter. If you can't laugh a lot because of your hard life, you can see funny things as the video on the top. And that will make you feel more better and it will also make your life more longer. So I hope lot's of poeple sees these kinds of videos and have a fun and more longer life. Also I hope you laughed by watching this video!!!
Friday, August 5, 2011
My Diary
August 6th Saturday
Dear Diary,
Poland, where I 'm living, it's not really hot in summer. So I just stayed in home and watched television all day. It was really boring so I ate things. I ate spagetti for breakfast. My mo is really good at making spagetties. So our family's favorite food is spagetti. Oh, and I haven't talked about my family. I don't have any brother or sister. I'm alone. Sometimes it's sad to be alone.(That's the reason why I have a cute puppy.)But sometimes it's happy that I'm alone. And my grandma and grandpa lives with my family. They are both really nice to me a lot! Also, my mom and dad, they are nice too. But sometimes they are man to me. Also My dad works in Big company called "Apple" and he's the leader of that company.(The one in the Poland.) But my mom just stays in home and play with her old friends...... Go back to the foods...... Okay for the lunch, we ate some pizzas. I don't really like pizza. But it's good to eat for lunch. And special thing is that our family doesn't eat dinner. We eat snacks for dinner. I know it's not god for our health... But..... it's so delicious. Afterb eating dinner with snacks, I ate some crackers. Those crackers taste like bread. And before going to the bed, I eat some drinks and some fruits. Also, the m&m's chocolate. Our family eats a lot because we have money to buy things. Also the picture on the top shows that how much our family eats for 1 week. It's 151.27 dollars. I think it's a lot!!!!! So I think from now on, I would never ever waste money a lot to just eat.
wirtten by Julie (Seo Hyo Ryung)
I got this picture from http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373680,00.html
I got this picture from http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373680,00.html
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